Re: [Enigma-devel] Re: English Translation

[Clifford J. Tasner]

Ronald & Company,

While I was playing, I came across two other texts that might benefit  
from revision:

1).  "Designed With Love" - the text should read "Did you really  
think this one was so easy!?" (with no comma and all in the past tense).

and

2).  "Gods of Enigma II" - a menacing laugh is usually written as  
"Bwahahahaha," not "Fwahahahaha" - it may be that moonpearl is trying  
for a particular effect, but it's more recognizable (and funnier) as  
"Bwahahahaha."

best,
Clifford


On Jan 22, 2007, at 2:05 PM, Ronald Lamprecht wrote:

> Hi,
>
> Clifford J. Tasner wrote:
> > What follows is a brief list of changes I'm suggesting (as well as  
> > two attached files).  Let me know if there are any ways that I can  
> > accommodate this process even more effectively.
>
> Thanks. The list is shorter than I expected it to be :-) .
>
> We will ask the level authors to adapt your changes and merge it  
> together with all translations.
>
> Ronald