[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/Paper paper.tex

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/03/31 12:01:39

Modified files:
        Paper          : paper.tex 

Log message:
        abstract comments

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex.diff?tr1=1.115&tr2=1.116&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex
diff -u manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.115 manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.116
--- manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.115   Mon Mar 31 11:48:24 2003
+++ manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex Mon Mar 31 12:01:39 2003
@@ -66,17 +66,22 @@
 the texture should produce a random feature vector in the brain
 after visual feature extraction. 
 
+% benja: First sentence should say that the textures
+% are used to *distinguish between different documents*
+% (or whatever things). The architectures should
+% be removed from the first sentence.
+
 Our motivating example is 
 \iftechreport the BuoyOING user interface for
     browsing hyperlinked document sets with fluid, non-disruptive linking.
     The interface 
 \else a hypertext user interface which \fi 
-shows a fragment of the target document of a link in the marginal,
-which, upon traversing the link, expands to fill the screen.
+shows a fragment of a link's target in the marginal.
+Upon traversing the link, the fragment expands to fill the screen.
 Our goal is to avoid user disorientation by
 texturing each document with a unique background so that the originating
 document can easily be recognized from the fragment.
-The user should then be able to learn the textures of the 
+The user should be able to learn the textures of the 
 most often visited
 documents, as per Zipf's law.