[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/Paper paper.tex

[Benja Fallenstein]

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Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/03/31 12:10:19

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        Paper          : paper.tex 

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        smoothen intro

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diff -u manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.117 manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.118
--- manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.117   Mon Mar 31 12:03:48 2003
+++ manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex Mon Mar 31 12:10:19 2003
@@ -181,16 +181,19 @@
 % similar but distinct objects distinguishable and easily recognizable.
 
 In this article, we introduce the use of procedurally generated unique 
backgrounds
-as a visualization of document identity: if each document has 
-a different, easily distinguishable background texture, 
-the user can become aware of the identity
-of a displayed item at a glance, 
-just by seeing 
-any {\em fragment} of the item, 
-without explicitly reading the title which might not even be visible.
-This property is vital
-for our example application discussed in Section~\ref{secbuoyoing} and is in 
fact
-one of the prime motivators for this work.
+as a visualization of document identity. In our approach, each document has
+a different, easily distinguishable background texture. 
+The user can thus identify a displayed item at a glance, 
+even if only a {\em fragment} of the item is shown, 
+without reading the title (which might the fragment may not even show).
+
+% benja: the following is waffle-- the above leads one
+% to believe it is *the* motivation, saying that it is
+% 'one of the prime motivators' only makes the statement weaker.
+
+% This property is vital
+% for our example application discussed in Section~\ref{secbuoyoing} and is in 
fact
+% one of the prime motivators for this work.
 
 
 % as a navigation aid in focus+context views.
@@ -212,8 +215,8 @@
 
 In the following sections,
 we first review related work on texturing.
-Next, we discuss the example user interface
-user interface to a hypertext structure.
+Next, we discuss an example user interface
+to a hypertext structure.
 Then, we formulate general principles for designing
 recognizable backgrounds\iftechreport, based on texture and image perception 
literature,\fi
 and present our hardware-accelerated implementation.