[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/Paper paper.tex

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/03/31 12:26:28

Modified files:
        Paper          : paper.tex 

Log message:
        editorial

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex.diff?tr1=1.118&tr2=1.119&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex
diff -u manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.118 manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.119
--- manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.118   Mon Mar 31 12:10:19 2003
+++ manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex Mon Mar 31 12:26:28 2003
@@ -183,9 +183,9 @@
 In this article, we introduce the use of procedurally generated unique 
backgrounds
 as a visualization of document identity. In our approach, each document has
 a different, easily distinguishable background texture. 
-The user can thus identify a displayed item at a glance, 
+The user can thus identify an item at a glance, 
 even if only a {\em fragment} of the item is shown, 
-without reading the title (which might the fragment may not even show).
+without reading the title (which the fragment may not even show).
 
 % benja: the following is waffle-- the above leads one
 % to believe it is *the* motivation, saying that it is
@@ -547,11 +547,12 @@
 The motivating example for unique backgrounds:
 the BuoyOING focus+context interface for browsing bidirectionally hyperlinked 
documents.
 The interface shows the relevant {\em fragments} of the other ends of the links
-and animates them fluidly to the focus upon traversing the link.,
-A small document network shown in a).
-A sequence of a user browsing the network is shown in b)
-without and in c) with background texture. 
-There are three keyframes where the view stops and two frames of each 
animation between the keyframes
+and animates them fluidly to the focus upon traversing the link.
+a) shows a small document network.
+b) and c) show what a user sees while browsing the network,
+b) without and c) with background texture. 
+There are three keyframes where the animation stops. 
+Two frames of each animation between the keyframes
 are shown.
 The unique backgrounds help the user notice that the upper right buoy in the 
last keyframe
 is actually a part of the same document (1) which was in the focus in the 
first keyframe.