[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/Paper paper.tex

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/03/31 09:53:32

Modified files:
        Paper          : paper.tex 

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        Cut

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex.diff?tr1=1.96&tr2=1.97&r1=text&r2=text

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Index: manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex
diff -u manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.96 manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.97
--- manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.96    Mon Mar 31 09:52:25 2003
+++ manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex Mon Mar 31 09:53:32 2003
@@ -1595,16 +1595,16 @@
 % 
 
 
-Discrete, unordered variables often occur coupled to other
-variables when drawing graphs; for example, a variable representing
-different makes of cars would be such. 
-If the number of different values that the variable takes are few,
-distinct symbols can be used...
+%Discrete, unordered variables often occur coupled to other
+%variables when drawing graphs; for example, a variable representing
+%different makes of cars would be such. 
+%If the number of different values that the variable takes are few,
+%distinct symbols can be used...
+%
+%Visualizing a discrete variable with unordered values
+%
 
-Visualizing a discrete variable with unordered values
-
-
-It can be argued that
+It can of course be argued that
 the backgrounds clutter the display
 visually, making the user interface more confusing,
 and may not even be helpful.
@@ -1614,7 +1614,7 @@
 
 Overall, however, we feel that the backgrounds can greatly improve user 
orientation,
 enabling more efficient views to hyperstructured content, and
-therefore the benefits outweigh the costs.
+therefore that the benefits can be made to outweigh the costs.
 
 
 \section{Acknowledgments}