[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/Paper paper.tex

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/03/31 09:28:24

Modified files:
        Paper          : paper.tex 

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        6b

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Index: manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex
diff -u manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.93 manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.94
--- manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.93    Mon Mar 31 09:25:57 2003
+++ manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex Mon Mar 31 09:28:24 2003
@@ -1237,34 +1237,30 @@
 
 \subsection{Text readability}
 
+JVK: laita viitteet
+
 XXX: http://www.opticsexpress.org/abstract.cfm?URI=OPEX-6-4-81
 % "Background variation effects were only seen when the text contrast was low"
 % "[...] several studies have indicated that there is a low correlation between
 %  subjective preference for text displays and empirical measures of their
 %  readability."
 
-TJL
-
 The most common criticism against this work concerns 
 text readability. 
 Indeed, one of the most difficult aspects of this work {\em was} tuning the 
random
 color selection to produce acceptable results.
 However, in the current version, even relatively small text is quite legible 
on the backgrounds.
 
-Text readability on the generated backgrounds depends 
+Additionally,
+text readability on the generated backgrounds depends 
 strongly on the text scale; making it easy for the user to zoom
 fluidly in and out helps.
 
-It is also possible to enhance the text readability explicitly.
-
-
-We have bee
-
-Related to framing the text with light colors, ...
-
-The bleaching is unnoticeable and works well because 
-we start from a fairly light background (>80 XXX).
-On a darker background, this approach would probably look silly.
+It is also possible to enhance the text readability explicitly,
+by lightening (``bleaching'') the background slightly around the area where 
the text
+is drawn.
+The bleaching can be made almost unnoticeable on a computer screen
+and works well because we start from a fairly light background.