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[Savannah-dev] [Bug #499] Awkwardly phrased FAQs


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Subject: [Savannah-dev] [Bug #499] Awkwardly phrased FAQs
Date: Wed, 29 May 2002 02:58:53 -0400

=================== Bug #499: Full Bug Snapshot ===================
http://savannah.gnu.org/bugs/?func=detailbug&bug_id=499&group_id=11

Submitted by: alexl                     Project: Savannah                       
Submitted on: 2002-May-28 23:58
Category:  Content                      Severity:  5 - Average                  
Priority:  None                         Bug Group:  None                        
Resolution:  None                       Assigned to:  None                      
Status:  Open                           Effort:  0.00                           

Summary:  Awkwardly phrased FAQs

Original Submission:  Several of the FAQ questions are rather awkwardly 
phrased, I would suggest changing:
 
"How is the registration process?"

to:

"What is the registration process?"

Similarly 

"How to upload my project?" 

would read better as:

"How do I upload my project?"

The following questions also make some minor grammatical errors, mainly 
relating to misusing the plural form of a verb or noun:

"Is there some delays on update?"

-> "Are there some delays on update?"

"Is there some places on internet to get more informations ?"

-> "Are there places on the Internet to get more information?"

"Are PHP and MySQL availables?"

-> "Are PHP and MySQL available?"

That's it!  Mostly minor, but the site would read better if they were fixed.  
Keep up the good work!



(Also there is a typo in the answer to this question "Regitration 
prerequisite.." should be "Registration prerequisite")




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