[Savannah-dev] [Bug #499] Awkwardly phrased FAQs

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=================== BUG #499: LATEST MODIFICATIONS ==================
http://savannah.gnu.org/bugs/?func=detailbug&bug_id=499&group_id=11

Changes by: Mathieu Roy <address@hidden>
Date: 2002-May-30 21:43 (Europe/Paris)

            What     | Removed                   | Added
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          Resolution | Later                     | Fixed
              Status | Open                      | Closed


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Ok, fixed.

The first case not really convince me since the goal of this 'question' is to 
give a preview of the registration process, not to explain the meaning of the 
registration process.



=================== BUG #499: FULL BUG SNAPSHOT ===================


Submitted by: alexl                     Project: Savannah                       
Submitted on: 2002-May-29 08:58
Category:  Content                      Severity:  3 - Ordinary                 
Priority:  Later                        Bug Group:  None                        
Resolution:  Fixed                      Assigned to:  yeupou                    
Status:  Closed                         Effort:  0.00                           

Summary:  Awkwardly phrased FAQs

Original Submission:  Several of the FAQ questions are rather awkwardly 
phrased, I would suggest changing:
 
"How is the registration process?"

to:

"What is the registration process?"

Similarly 

"How to upload my project?" 

would read better as:

"How do I upload my project?"

The following questions also make some minor grammatical errors, mainly 
relating to misusing the plural form of a verb or noun:

"Is there some delays on update?"

-> "Are there some delays on update?"

"Is there some places on internet to get more informations ?"

-> "Are there places on the Internet to get more information?"

"Are PHP and MySQL availables?"

-> "Are PHP and MySQL available?"

That's it!  Mostly minor, but the site would read better if they were fixed.  
Keep up the good work!



(Also there is a typo in the answer to this question "Regitration 
prerequisite.." should be "Registration prerequisite")


Follow-up Comments
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Date: 2002-May-30 21:43             By: yeupou
Ok, fixed.

The first case not really convince me since the goal of this 'question' is to 
give a preview of the registration process, not to explain the meaning of the 
registration process.

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Date: 2002-May-29 11:15             By: yeupou
I'll fix this soon, while enhancing the whole FAQ system.




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