[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

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Module name:    manuscripts
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Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/11/13 18:01:00

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        FutureVision   : vision.rst 

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Index: manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst
diff -u manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.195 
manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.196
--- manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.195   Thu Nov 13 17:57:35 2003
+++ manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst Thu Nov 13 18:00:59 2003
@@ -828,13 +828,13 @@
 pieces of articles onto *spatial canvases*: infinite,
 scrollable papers.
 Transclusions are automatically bidirectionally connected 
-to the article they are from; a buoy shows a shrunk version
+to the article they are from; a buoy shows a shrunken version
 of the article, and clicking on the buoy brings the article
 to the center for the user to read.
 
 Additionally, the user can type text onto the canvases,
 and link two pieces of text on different canvases
-(linked canvases are shown as buoys).
+(linked canvases are also shown as buoys).
 
 In the figure, there are two foci. 
 The **upper focus** shows **a PDF article**
@@ -867,13 +867,16 @@
   references.
 - Canvases for communicating specific ideas. These
   contain Memex-like "trails" of transclusions from
-  different articles, intersersed with text discussing these.
+  different articles, interspersed with text discussing these.
 - A central canvas that has links to the other canvases.
 
 In our experience, we have found the transclusion facility 
 very useful: copying a well-chosen region of an article
-to the a canvas allows the user (either the one who made the
-transclusion, or a collaborator) reading the canvas to quickly
+to a canvas allows the user 
+reading the canvas 
+(either the one who made the
+transclusion, or a collaborator) 
+to quickly
 just read the emphasized part, going back to the article
 for the details if desired. The ease with which the transclusions
 are created (simply cut and paste) has allowed users to quickly summarize