[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

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 We propose to use pointer records along with hash-based
 addressing to implement a P2P-based replacement
-for the Web (not including dynamic pages
-generated through server-side scripting). Such a Web
+for the Web (not including server-side scripting). Such a Web
 would have the benefits of semantic-free referencing--
 URIs don't have to change because of trademark conflicts
 as in DNS, for example-- but go beyond the proposal
-[balakrishnan03semanticfree]_
 to replace DNS but keep the centralized architecture of
-Web servers.
+Web servers [balakrishnan03semanticfree]_.
 
 The remainder of this paper is structured as follows.
 In Section 2, we discuss how existing P2P systems handle updating.
 In Section 3, we introduce pointer records.
 In Section 4, we present the Storm data model.
-In Section 5 we discuss some applications
-of our contributions, and Section 6 gives an overview of our
+In Section 5 we discuss some applications,
+and Section 6 discusses our
 implementation. Section 7 concludes.
 
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