[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/10 07:46:18

Modified files:
        pointers       : article.rst 

Log message:
        delete a redundant part of sentence to get us down to one line over 
limit

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.221&tr2=1.222&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/pointers/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.221 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.222
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.221      Mon Nov 10 07:44:02 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Mon Nov 10 07:46:18 2003
@@ -348,9 +348,9 @@
 .. [#consistencytime] Many applications
    are believed to be able to cope with looser consistency
    semantics; for example, the NFS client for OceanStore 
-   doesn't query the primary replica but only tries to find 
+   doesn't query the primary replica, but only tries to find 
    anywhere on the network a heartbeat 
-   less than 30 seconds old
+   less than 30 seconds old.
 
 Pointer records
 ===============
@@ -594,8 +594,7 @@
 needs only the pointer records, not a connection
 to the network, the software update could be
 performed exactly the same way as with an Internet connection.
-Other P2P versioning schemes, such as the Content-Addressable
-Network proposal, do not share this advantage.
+Other P2P versioning schemes do not share this advantage.
 
 
 Implementation