[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/10 10:50:36

Modified files:
        pointers       : article.rst 

Log message:
        minor twids to get back to 5 pages (no semantic changes)

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.225&tr2=1.226&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/pointers/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.225 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.226
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.225      Mon Nov 10 10:45:25 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Mon Nov 10 10:50:35 2003
@@ -339,9 +339,9 @@
 that do not exist at the file system interface
 presented to the user. Therefore, even in OceanStore,
 a user cannot simply download a version of a file 
-and an associated heartbeat and store them on their
-harddisk (off-line capability) or distribute them 
-through different P2P networks (heterogeneity).
+and an associated heartbeat and store them locally
+(off-line capability) or distribute them 
+through other P2P networks (heterogeneity).
 
 .. to keep the version "alive." Of course, the 
    very idea of Oceanstore is to make this unnecessary 
@@ -377,7 +377,7 @@
 from which the owner's current public key can be obtained.
 The charter also includes information,
 e.g. a semantic-free random bitstring,
-to distinguish the pointer from all other documents
+to distinguish the pointer from other documents
 owned by the same entity.
 
 
@@ -536,7 +536,7 @@
 the caches of other machines on the LAN,
 and the complete set of files ever downloaded to the local harddisk.
 The Storm API makes such clients simple to implement.
-The model is analogous to the HTTP protocol: a common language
+The model is analogous to HTTP: a common language
 spoken by all clients and servers.
 
 .. somewhat tangential to this workshop's theme,