[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/Paper paper.tex

[Janne V. Kujala]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Janne V. Kujala <address@hidden>        03/03/30 14:41:39

Modified files:
        Paper          : paper.tex 

Log message:
        twiddle

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex.diff?tr1=1.72&tr2=1.73&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex
diff -u manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.72 manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.73
--- manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.72    Sun Mar 30 14:19:37 2003
+++ manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex Sun Mar 30 14:41:39 2003
@@ -1140,8 +1140,8 @@
 visually, making the user interface more confusing,
 and may not even be helpful.
 Indeed, many aspects of the system are a compromise between
-recognizability and some other goal such as readability, rendering
-performance, or a less well-defined goal such as user comfortability.
+recognizability and other goals such as readability, rendering
+performance, or user comfortability.
 
 Overall, we feel that the backgrounds can greatly improve user orientation,
 enabling more efficient views to hyperstructured content, and
@@ -1157,15 +1157,13 @@
 or content of the document 
 so that the textures of any two important files 
 are similar only by chance.
-Having any semantics encoded in the appearance of the textures
+Having any semantics encoded in the texture
 would prohibit orthogonal structures with differing semantics
 of the same content.
 
-Zoomability:
-
 %The background textures should be be recognizable at different scales.
 Although texture perception is scale-independent to some extent,
-the limited resolution of the display and certain spatial interactions 
+the display resolution and certain spatial interactions 
 in color perception limit the scale at which
 different features can be pre-attentively perceived.
 %XXXrefs?