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Re: [Charter modification proposal]: and --> but they


From: Davi Leal
Subject: Re: [Charter modification proposal]: and --> but they
Date: Mon, 24 Sep 2007 23:10:16 +0200
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MJ Ray wrote:
> >  However, voting memberships expire yearly /and/ can be renewed.
> >  However, voting memberships expire yearly /though/ can be renewed.
>
> Maybe "though they can be renewed" or "but they can be renewed" but
> "though" on its own sounds a little strange.

From your two suggestions, I have chosen:

  "but they can be renewed"


Of course, it is always open to improvements. If nobody disagree I will commit 
it to CVS in some days.

  http://gnuherds.org/charter#Membership
  

Davi




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