[bug-sourceinstall] Re: Documentation

[Claudio Fontana]

Hello,

I have asked for the help of a native English speaker,
 and here's what I (well, he) came out with:

Removed:
"You can also try the term ``Open Source'' (the Free
Software movement generally despises the term, but it
is less prone to sending you to a freeware or even
commercial page than trying to enter ``Free Software''
in your engine)."

Added:
"You can also try the term ``Open Source''.
 
The Free Software and Open Source movements have
different goals, but search engines tend to find pages
with the term ``free'' as in no-cost, 
while free software is about freedom.  

http://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-software-for-freedom.html

explains the relationship further.
"

Do you think it's ok?

Claudio


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