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Re: GDP: rearrange manual
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Valentin Villenave |
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Re: GDP: rearrange manual |
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Mon, 10 Sep 2007 14:32:20 +0200 |
Just a question...
(by the way, is it really relevant to cross post this entire
discussion to -devel?)
I'm finishing translating the current chapter #9 (changing-defaults)
and here's what I see:
9.3.2
"Suppose we want to move the fingering indication in the fragment below:"
===> but it actually doesn't tell how to do it; you have to keep reading...
9.3.3
"The HTML page that we found in the previous section"
===> now we're beginning to understand what we've seen previously.
*but* we still don't have the bloody answer :)
9.3.4
"Recall that we wanted to change the position of the..."
===> And *now* we have the answer...
It's fun, interesting, thrilling, very well thought. great pedagogy;
but it implies that the subsections are absolutely not independant
from each other.
Therefore, I would second Rune's proposal for gathering subsections on
a single page.
Or we'd have to rewrite this whole section (and that would be a pity).
Graham, what do you think?
Valentin
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual, (continued)
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual, Trevor Bača, 2007/09/09
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual, Rune Zedeler, 2007/09/09
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual, Eyolf Østrem, 2007/09/09
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual, Graham Percival, 2007/09/10
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual, Eyolf Østrem, 2007/09/10
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual, Graham Percival, 2007/09/10
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual,
Valentin Villenave <=
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual, Graham Percival, 2007/09/10
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual, Valentin Villenave, 2007/09/10
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual, Mats Bengtsson, 2007/09/10
- Re: GDP: rearrange manual, John Mandereau, 2007/09/10
Re: GDP: rearrange manual, Graham Percival, 2007/09/09