[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/11/10 03:44:33

Modified files:
        pointers       : article.rst 

Log message:
        tighten

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.182&tr2=1.183&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/pointers/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.182 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.183
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.182      Mon Nov 10 03:43:00 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Mon Nov 10 03:44:33 2003
@@ -177,11 +177,12 @@
 Permanence is an important concern, as seen by the following example.
 In 1997, NASA launched the Cassini-Huygens spacecraft
 on a mission to Saturn. Before the launch, the mission
-was widely criticized for its use of 
+was widely criticized as a potential threat
+to billions of human lives,
+for its use of 
 plutonium
-to generate electricity. Activists claim that
-the launch of such devices poses a threat to
-billions of human lives. To facilitate the debate,
+to generate electricity. 
+To facilitate the debate,
 SpaceViews, a publication of the National Space Society,
 published a list of links to web pages of both
 Cassini opponents and supporters [#rtg-links]_.
@@ -198,6 +199,10 @@
 a single point of failure-- and censorship-- for the *entire* Web!
 
 .. (cut) radioisotope thermoelectric generators (RTGs), using 
+
+..  Activists claim that
+    the launch of such devices poses a threat to
+    billions of human lives. 
 
 .. [#rtg-links] ``http://www.seds.org/spaceviews/cassini/ rtgpages.html``.
    All links dereferenced on October 27th, 2003.