[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/11/10 03:43:00

Modified files:
        pointers       : article.rst 

Log message:
        Twid; tighten

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.181&tr2=1.182&r1=text&r2=text

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diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.181 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.182
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.181      Mon Nov 10 03:19:40 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Mon Nov 10 03:43:00 2003
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@
    for names doesn't exist?"
 
 We hold that to succeed, a P2P Web would need to provide
-the following features for users: 
+the following features of filesharing systems for its users: 
 
 Off-line capability 
        The ability to 
@@ -139,7 +139,8 @@
        if the LAN is disconnected from the internet 
 Heterogeneity
        The possibility to
-       use different P2P networks interchangeably 
+       use different P2P networks interchangeably, even
+       simultaneously, sharing the same data to all of them,
        to
        a) withstand
        exploits of single network; b) one size doesn't fit all
@@ -176,8 +177,8 @@
 Permanence is an important concern, as seen by the following example.
 In 1997, NASA launched the Cassini-Huygens spacecraft
 on a mission to Saturn. Before the launch, the mission
-was widely criticized for its use of radioisotope
-thermoelectric generators (RTGs), using plutonium
+was widely criticized for its use of 
+plutonium
 to generate electricity. Activists claim that
 the launch of such devices poses a threat to
 billions of human lives. To facilitate the debate,
@@ -195,6 +196,8 @@
 The Internet Archive's Wayback Machine [waybackmachine]_
 alleviates these concerns somewhat, but it introduces
 a single point of failure-- and censorship-- for the *entire* Web!
+
+.. (cut) radioisotope thermoelectric generators (RTGs), using 
 
 .. [#rtg-links] ``http://www.seds.org/spaceviews/cassini/ rtgpages.html``.
    All links dereferenced on October 27th, 2003.