[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/11/04 04:27:43

Modified files:
        pointers       : article.rst 

Log message:
        E.g. adjustments

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.117&tr2=1.118&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/pointers/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.117 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.118
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.117      Tue Nov  4 04:25:36 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Tue Nov  4 04:27:43 2003
@@ -376,7 +376,7 @@
 to the block ids of pointer records.
 
 The Storm model is *simple to implement* on top existing
-P2P overlays. It allows *simple synchronization* e.g.
+P2P overlays. It allows *simple synchronization*
 between mirrors, consisting of only copying all blocks
 available on only one of the hosts to the other host.
 It is also *robust*, because all the information is stored
@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@
 
 The data model used in this P2P Web is independent
 from the underlying mechanism used to find data;
-a client could utilize e.g. different overlay networks
+for example, a client could utilize different overlay networks
 with different properties (such as speed and anonymity),
 the caches of other machines on the LAN,
 and the complete set of files ever downloaded to the local harddisk.
@@ -426,7 +426,7 @@
 spoken by all clients and servers.
 
 In an ad-hoc wireless local network between mobile devices,
-the latest issue of e.g. Slashdot (an popular online news site)
+the latest issue of, e.g., Slashdot (an popular online news site)
 could be downloaded from other devices' caches, instead
 of paying for wireless Internet access; trust would not be
 an issue as the pointer blocks' signatures could be validated.