[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

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Module name:    manuscripts
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Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/01 15:35:00

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        pointers       : article.rst 

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        cut unnecessary words

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 and increase availability. However, if the Web worked like
 a file-sharing system, Web pages could never be updated.
 
-In this paper, we present a versioning system usable
-for a P2P Web as well as for updateable media files
-in a file-sharing application (e.g. corrected versions
+We present an updating system usable
+for a P2P Web as well as for file-sharing (e.g. corrected versions
 of Project Gutenberg books) and P2P-based software distribution
-(akin to Debian's ``apt-get`` system).
+(akin to Debian's ``apt-get``).
 
 Most current P2P systems have no facility 
 for updating documents. The systems that do