[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/01 16:10:43

Modified files:
        pointers       : article.rst 

Log message:
        twids

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.57&tr2=1.58&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/pointers/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.57 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.58
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.57       Sat Nov  1 16:07:10 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Sat Nov  1 16:10:43 2003
@@ -107,8 +107,8 @@
 on the shoulders of giants;" but how can we do that today,
 if the shoulders keep rotting away?
 
-(The Internet Archive's Waybac Machine [waybackmachine]_
-alleviates this concern, but it introduces
+(The Internet Archive's Wayback Machine [waybackmachine]_
+alleviates these concerns, but it introduces
 a single point of failure for the *entire* Web!)
 
 .. Links shouldn't break when documents move or
@@ -123,8 +123,8 @@
 We don't propose that every byte of information ever published
 on the Web has to be kept around forever. However,
 we do believe that as long as someone does keep a copy,
-data should remain accessible, and links should continue
-to work.
+data should remain accessible, like in a file-sharing system,
+and links should continue to work.
 
 .. Location-independent, semantic-free, *self-verifying* 
    identifiers (ref SFR paper [balakrishnan03semanticfree]_,