[Gzz-commits] journals/plans SA_2003.rst

[Janne V. Kujala]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/fenfire
Module name:    journals
Changes by:     Janne V. Kujala <address@hidden>        03/05/12 09:19:07

Modified files:
        plans          : SA_2003.rst 

Log message:
        fix typos and fill gaps

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/fenfire/journals/plans/SA_2003.rst.diff?tr1=1.63&tr2=1.64&r1=text&r2=text

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Index: journals/plans/SA_2003.rst
diff -u journals/plans/SA_2003.rst:1.63 journals/plans/SA_2003.rst:1.64
--- journals/plans/SA_2003.rst:1.63     Mon May 12 09:17:53 2003
+++ journals/plans/SA_2003.rst  Mon May 12 09:19:07 2003
@@ -78,11 +78,11 @@
 [conklin87hypertext-onpage-38-40]_.
 
 Improving user orientation through user interface improvements has 
-recently received much attention. The have been much work
+recently received much attention. There have been much work
 on providing more context of the link destination or making 
 the transition less abrupt 
[zellweger98fluid-andalso-fc-zooming-andalso-schilit98digital]_.
-However, the one-directionally linked hyperstructure of the Web 
-also XXX
+However, the underlying one-directionally linked hyperstructure of 
+the Web and many other hypermedia systems can also cause disorientation.
 
 .. We develop a system, named as Fenfire, which uses novel ways to control 
information 
    flow in the screen.
@@ -99,8 +99,8 @@
 any two documents containing the characters that the link connects. 
Xanalogical links 
 are external and bidirectional. 
 
-The hyperstructural approach to information opens new possibilities 
-to user interfaces. 
+The bidirectionally linked hyperstructural approach to information opens new 
+possibilities to user interfaces. 
 The user can connect any two items which
 will then be near each other in hyperspace, easily visible and
 accessible from one to the other.
@@ -232,7 +232,7 @@
 usability issues that need to be solved.
 
 
-One of the most important tasks in mainting user orientation 
+One of the most important tasks in maintaining user orientation 
 is good layout and non-disruptive, fluid animation between views. 
 - irregu, nadir, buoys, etc.