[Gzz-commits] gzz/Documentation/Presentations/ThursdaySeminar...

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    gzz
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/03/27 04:16:18

Modified files:
        Documentation/Presentations/ThursdaySeminar03: ABSTRACTS 

Log message:
        stylistic fixes in vegai's abstract

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/gzz/Documentation/Presentations/ThursdaySeminar03/ABSTRACTS.diff?tr1=1.12&tr2=1.13&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: gzz/Documentation/Presentations/ThursdaySeminar03/ABSTRACTS
diff -u gzz/Documentation/Presentations/ThursdaySeminar03/ABSTRACTS:1.12 
gzz/Documentation/Presentations/ThursdaySeminar03/ABSTRACTS:1.13
--- gzz/Documentation/Presentations/ThursdaySeminar03/ABSTRACTS:1.12    Thu Mar 
27 04:13:00 2003
+++ gzz/Documentation/Presentations/ThursdaySeminar03/ABSTRACTS Thu Mar 27 
04:16:18 2003
@@ -99,19 +99,19 @@
     Storm
     =====
 
-    STORage Module is a library for storing and retrieving data as
+    Storm (STORage Module) is a library for storing and retrieving data as
     immutable byte sequences, which are identified by cryptographic
     content hashes. This allows for addressing two important issues 
     of data mobility: dangling links and version management.
 
-    Dangling link is a known problem in contemporary hypertext networks, 
+    Dangling (broken) links are a well-known problem in contemporary hypertext 
networks, 
     ultimately caused by the links referring to a specific location.
     In Storm, we assume that location-independent identifiers are resolvable 
-    in an efficient and trusty manner, thus causing links not to dangle.
+    in an efficient and trusted manner, thus causing links not to dangle.
 
-    Version management ensures that a user can move and work fluently
+    Version management allows a user to fluently work with and move between
     between different versions of a resource. This includes editing
-    the current version, merging with another version, forking, and reverting
+    the current version, merging it with another version, forking, and 
reverting
     to older versions.