Re: Fix grammar and markup (was Re: Feedback of the GNU Guix manual)

[Matt]

 ---- On Tue, 16 Apr 2024 08:43:23 +0200  pelzflorian (Florian Pelz)  wrote --- 
 > Hi Matt.  When triple checking, I read in “info "(texinfo)@pxref"”:
 > 
 >    In past versions of Texinfo, it was not allowed to write punctuation
 > after a '@pxref', so it could be used _only_ before a right parenthesis.
 > This is no longer the case.  The effect of '@pxref{NODE-NAME}' is
 > similar to that of 'see @ref{NODE-NAME}'.  However, in many circumstance
 > the latter is preferrable, as this makes it clear in the Info output
 > that the word "see" should be present.
 > 
 > Because of this last sentence, my tendency would now be to use @pxref
 > only for parentheses.  (Texinfo is really confusing.)  Should I just cut
 > these changes:
 > 
 > (Linux Services): Use @pxref to start phrase.
 > (Configuring the Shell): Use @pxref to start phrase.

Yes, I agree that cutting those, and using the original "see @ref{}", is what 
the Texinfo manual says is correct.  We should also cut this change:

(Setting Up the Daemon): use @xref to start sentence.

The original was also correct.

The only change that should remain is:

(Build Systems): capitalize "python" and start parenthesized reference with
@pxref.

Thanks for checking that.  I had it wrong and I learned something!