Re: [PATCH] Various fixes for early init file changes

[Clément Pit-Claudel]

On 2018-03-03 00:31, Radon Rosborough wrote:
>  This file is loaded before the package system is initialized, so in it
> -you can customize variables that affect the initialization process,
> -such as @code{package-enable-at-startup} and @code{package-load-list}.
> address@hidden Installation}.
> +you can customize variables that affect the initialization process
> +(i.e. @code{package-initialize}), such as

This parenthesis confused me a bit at first (I though you were giving an 
example of variables that affect the initialization process).  I suggest 
removing the parenthesis and saying "variables that affect the *package* 
initialization process".

> +before Emacs startup has completed, signal a warning."

Maybe just "warn"?

Thanks again for the hard work,
Clément.