Re: Web: update Productions list (issue 348040043 by address@hidden)

[fedelogy]

On 2018/12/11 13:10:09, lilypond-pkx wrote:
> nits - hope this isn't 'bike-shedding' too much


https://codereview.appspot.com/348040043/diff/20001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
> File Documentation/web/introduction.itexi (right):


https://codereview.appspot.com/348040043/diff/20001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode741
> Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:741: with over 2000 pieces of
classical
> sheet music for free download, is
> '... it is ...'


The subject is before (in the @uref).. should it be repeated in English?



https://codereview.appspot.com/348040043/diff/20001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode748
> Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:748: collects over 800 scores of
baroque
> music. The archive includes scores,
> "... started in 2005 and with over 800 scores of baroque music, the
archive ..."


Again, the subject is before (in the @uref).  This suggestion doesn't
work and anyway I think that breaking this item in two sentences is
needed.


https://codereview.appspot.com/348040043/diff/20001/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi#newcode773
> Documentation/web/introduction.itexi:773: repository of LilyPond
source files of
> all pieces in Mutopia library.
> Needs an (in)definite article: 'a repository ...' or 'the repository
...'

Ok, I'll amend the sentence.


https://codereview.appspot.com/348040043/