master 90bc1afe69: ; * etc/NEWS: Improve entry about Outline mode changes.

[Eli Zaretskii]

branch: master
commit 90bc1afe69c82b3ad0e3ddcf8606fcf4d2e92e5f
Author: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
Commit: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>

    ; * etc/NEWS: Improve entry about Outline mode changes.
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 etc/NEWS | 13 +++++++------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/etc/NEWS b/etc/NEWS
index 8cdc55d0e2..87b009d5e2 100644
--- a/etc/NEWS
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@@ -259,13 +259,14 @@ These will take you (respectively) to the next and 
previous "page".
 
 ** Outline Mode
 
-*** Support for a default visibility state.
+*** Support for customizing the default visibility state of headings.
 Customize the option 'outline-default-state' to define what headings
-are visible when the mode is set.  When equal to a number, the option
-'outline-default-rules' determines the visibility of the subtree
-starting at the corresponding level.  Values are provided to show
-a heading subtree unless the heading match a regexp, or its subtree
-has long lines or is long.
+will be visible after Outline mode is turned on.  When equal to a
+number, the option 'outline-default-rules' determines the visibility
+of the subtree starting at the corresponding level.  Values are
+provided to control showing a heading subtree depending on whether the
+heading matches a regexp, or on whether its subtree has long lines or
+is itself too long.
 
 ** Outline Minor Mode