[Wesnoth-cvs-commits] wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/utils i...

[Joseph Simmons]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/wesnoth
Module name:    wesnoth
Branch:         
Changes by:     Joseph Simmons <address@hidden> 05/08/07 18:53:28

Modified files:
        data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/utils: intro.cfg 

Log message:
        More string revisions

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/wesnoth/wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/utils/intro.cfg.diff?tr1=1.2&tr2=1.3&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/utils/intro.cfg
diff -u wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/utils/intro.cfg:1.2 
wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/utils/intro.cfg:1.3
--- wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/utils/intro.cfg:1.2 Sun Jul 24 
19:27:08 2005
+++ wesnoth/data/scenarios/Eastern_Invasion/utils/intro.cfg     Sun Aug  7 
18:53:27 2005
@@ -3,15 +3,15 @@
        #textdomain wesnoth-ei
        [part]
        music=wesnoth-1
-       story= _ "It was the thirtieth year of Konrad II's reign, and there 
were strange events happening on the eastern border of Wesnoth."
+       story= _ "It was the thirtieth year of Konrad II's reign, and there 
were strange occurances on the eastern border of Wesnoth."
        background=campaigns/Eastern_Invasion/maps/eastern_invasion.png
        [/part]
        [part]
-       story= _ "Cattle and beasts of burden were found dead in the fields, 
and men went missing from their houses, with no clues but a thin stream of 
black blood. At first the settlers suspected raiders, but there was nothing 
east of them but a small mountain range and miles of swamp."
+       story= _ "Cattle and beasts of burden were found dead in the fields, 
and men went missing from their houses, with no clues but a thin stream of 
black blood. At first the settlers suspected raiders, but there was nothing 
east of them but a small mountain range and miles of swamp, where no one had 
been seen for many years."
        background=campaigns/Eastern_Invasion/maps/eastern_invasion.png
        [/part]
        [part]
-       story= _ "Every day the terror grew greater, until the citizens of the 
eastern villages were forced to send a messenger to the King. The messenger 
rode hard for many days and nights, and finally reached the city of Weldyn."
+       story= _ "The disappearances did not stop, and every day the terror 
grew greater. Eventually, the people living in the eastern villages sent a 
messenger to the King, asking for help. The messenger rode hard for many days 
and nights, and finally reached the city of Weldyn."
 #      background=misc/loystory3.png
        background=campaigns/Eastern_Invasion/maps/eastern_invasion.png
        [/part]
@@ -26,15 +26,15 @@
        background=campaigns/Eastern_Invasion/maps/eastern_invasion.png
        [/part]
        [part]
-       story= _ "One of them, the South Guard, had been the site of the 
previous attacks. Konrad II decided to re-man the other outposts also. He sent 
two of the most promising young officers to them."
+       story= _ "One of them, the South Guard, had been the site of the 
previous attacks, was still occupied. Konrad II decided to re-man the other 
outposts also. He sent two of the most promising young officers to them."
        background=campaigns/Eastern_Invasion/maps/eastern_invasion.png
        [/part]
        [part]
-       story= _ "Deoran, a knight, was already in place in the southern 
outpost. To the northern outpost he sent Owaec, a clan noble. To the middle 
outpost, he sent Gweddry, who would be accompanied by Dacyn the mage. It is 
with them this story is concerned."
+       story= _ "To the northern outpost he sent Owaec, a clan noble. To the 
middle outpost, he sent Gweddry, who would be accompanied by Dacyn the mage. It 
is with them this story is concerned."
        background=campaigns/Eastern_Invasion/maps/eastern_invasion.png
        [/part]
        [part]
-       story= _ "All went well once the King's forces arrived. There were no 
attacks for several weeks, and Gweddry's men started to grow uncautious. Then, 
at dawn one day, Gweddry and his men were roused by startled cries of the night 
watchmen..."
+       story= _ "All went well once the King's forces arrived. There were no 
attacks for several weeks, and Gweddry's men started to grow uncautious. Then, 
at dawn one day, Gweddry and his men were roused by the startled cries of the 
night watchmen..."
        background=campaigns/Eastern_Invasion/maps/eastern_invasion.png
        [/part]
 [/story]