[Office-commits] r9926 - trunk/campaigns/gnubucks

[sysadmin]

Author: johns
Date: Thu Oct  1 16:51:30 2009
New Revision: 9926

Log:
Edits

Modified:
   trunk/campaigns/gnubucks/eligibility-criteria.mdwn

Modified: trunk/campaigns/gnubucks/eligibility-criteria.mdwn
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--- trunk/campaigns/gnubucks/eligibility-criteria.mdwn  Thu Oct  1 16:42:19 
2009        (r9925)
+++ trunk/campaigns/gnubucks/eligibility-criteria.mdwn  Thu Oct  1 16:51:30 
2009        (r9926)
@@ -1,18 +1,20 @@
 ## GNU Bucks ##
 
-[Free system distributions][distros] are committed to only
-distributing information for practical use when it's free.  They go
-through a lot of effort to prevent nonfree materials from getting
-in—but a lot of software goes into a distribution, and it's not
-practical to check it all.  People who report nonfree software in one
-of these endorsed distributions can be rewarded with GNU Bucks.
+[Free system distributions][distros] are committed to distributing
+information for practical use—like software and
+documentation—only when it's free. They go through a lot of
+effort to prevent nonfree materials from getting in—but a lot of
+software goes into a distribution, and packages are frequently
+updated, so it's difficult to check everything. People who help with
+this verification work by finding and reporting nonfree components in
+one of these endorsed distributions can be rewarded with GNU Bucks.
 
 <div style="margin: auto auto;"><img src="/distros/gnubuck400.jpg"></div>
 
 GNU Bucks are issued in one denomination&mdash;pi&mdash;and signed by
 Free Software Foundation president and "Chief GNUisance" Richard
-Stallman.  We also maintain a list of [people who have received GNU
-Bucks][recipients].  This is all just our way of saying thanks to
+Stallman. We will also be maintaining a list of people who have
+received GNU Bucks. This is all just our way of saying thanks to
 people who have helped contribute to the goals of the free software
 movement.
 
@@ -25,7 +27,6 @@
 together.  Just follow the instructions below.
 
 [distros]: /distros/free-distros.html
-[recipients]: /help/gnu-bucks-recipients.html
 [fsdg]: /distros/free-system-distribution-guidelines.html
 
 ### Short Instructions ###