Re: Doc: Correct and extend infos about LilyDev setup (issue 561360043 by address@hidden)

[lemzwerg]

And hopefully some final nits.  Thanks for your patience!


https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/565550050/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi
File Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/565550050/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode147
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:147: Verify the summary
details and click @q{Create}, when you are
I think it's better to avoid the comma before 'when'.  Maybe it is even
better to replace 'when' with 'as soon as' (and still without comma).

https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/565550050/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode175
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:175: @warning{Since the
default keyboard layout is US (american).  You
s/american/American/
s/.  You/, you/

https://codereview.appspot.com/561360043/diff/565550050/Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi#newcode194
Documentation/contributor/quick-start.itexi:194: You might need to
change the keyboard layout from default US (american)
s/american/American/

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