[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/10 05:42:38

Modified files:
        pointers       : article.rst 

Log message:
        polish abstract more

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.210&tr2=1.211&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/pointers/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.210 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.211
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.210      Mon Nov 10 05:39:49 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Mon Nov 10 05:42:37 2003
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
 by filesharing systems.
 However, current update mechanisms for P2P networks do not have
 the simplicity of filesharing, as versioning
-information has to be kept as special internal state in the network.
+information has to be kept as special state in the network.
 
 
 .. filesharing systems don't allow documents
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
 ..  However, current P2P system do not provide adequate versioning
     because 
 
-To allow versions to be obtained from any host that has a copy,
+To allow versioning information to be stored like other data,
 we propose to use *pointer records*,
 which can be shared and sought for
 through the network as ordinary files.