[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision plan.txt

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
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Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/08 13:04:35

Modified files:
        FutureVision   : plan.txt 

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CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/FutureVision/plan.txt.diff?tr1=1.6&tr2=1.7&r1=text&r2=text

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Index: manuscripts/FutureVision/plan.txt
diff -u manuscripts/FutureVision/plan.txt:1.6 
manuscripts/FutureVision/plan.txt:1.7
--- manuscripts/FutureVision/plan.txt:1.6       Sat Nov  8 13:02:58 2003
+++ manuscripts/FutureVision/plan.txt   Sat Nov  8 13:04:35 2003
@@ -11,7 +11,14 @@
 - XXX The references you give are
   applicable, but aren't sufficient-- what do we do?
 - Don't say "intertwingled"
-
+- Add illustration of zzstructure, comparing with RDF structure
+  in 3.2
+- Leave "relatively monolithic" out?
+- Look at & discuss RDFviz (give a somewhat better overview
+  of RDF visualization...)
+- Animations of buoys &c
+- Leave libvob section out??
+- Continue review in 4.1 beyond 1994
 
 Examples
 ========
@@ -27,6 +34,9 @@
 (Go through whole paper and look for instances:)
 
 - Make it sound less like Ted speaking (according to reviewer)...
+
+  - Contrast what we propose with what Ted says...
+
 - Say where we conject, give reasons for why we believe
   our claims
 
@@ -49,6 +59,9 @@
 
   - XXX maybe give an 'everyday' example scenario?
   - refer to this from abstract? (We discuss...)
+  - It's not about "more" interconnections, it's about
+    having items and their interconnections *at all*
+  - Move discussion about paper notes here?
 
 - Relationship between items and documents: