[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/06 09:48:09

Modified files:
        pointers       : article.rst 

Log message:
        edit

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.158&tr2=1.159&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/pointers/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.158 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.159
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.158      Thu Nov  6 09:46:40 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Thu Nov  6 09:48:09 2003
@@ -113,7 +113,7 @@
 
 There are some non-filesharing P2P systems 
 that do offer an update mechanism. However, none of these
-works like a filesharing system: To keep a version 
+provides the benefits of a filesharing system: To keep a version 
 of a page online, it does not suffice for one user
 to download and store a copy; when the publisher
 loses interest, the page disappears (except in the case