[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/pointers article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/06 02:35:20

Modified files:
        pointers       : article.rst 

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http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.141&tr2=1.142&r1=text&r2=text

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diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.141 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.142
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.141      Thu Nov  6 02:23:22 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Thu Nov  6 02:35:20 2003
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@
 bitstring, to distinguish the pointer from all other documents
 owned by the same entity.
 
-To associate pointers with versions, our system uses *pointer records*
+To associate pointers with versions, our system uses *pointer records*:
 small files that, similar to OceanStore's heartbeats,
 are signed by the pointer's owner, and
 contain at least the following information:
@@ -332,8 +332,8 @@
 ====================
 
 In this section, we introduce the Storm [#]_ data model, 
-a simple but powerful abstraction over both local storage
-and several P2P networks. The Storm API can be used
+an API providing simple but powerful abstraction over both local storage
+and several types of P2P network. The Storm API can be used
 by P2P Web applications, which then do not have to deal
 with each P2P network implementation independently.
 
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@
 .. XXX NOTE: if we move any sections around, update
    the above section number!
 
-The Storm data model is comprised of the following components:
+The model is comprised of the following components:
 
 Blocks, identified by hash
     All data is stored in *blocks*, which are file-like,