[Gzz-commits] manuscripts ./gzigzag.bib pointers/article.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Branch:         
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/11/03 14:15:12

Modified files:
        .              : gzigzag.bib 
        pointers       : article.rst 

Log message:
        refs

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/gzigzag.bib.diff?tr1=1.149&tr2=1.150&r1=text&r2=text
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/pointers/article.rst.diff?tr1=1.101&tr2=1.102&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/gzigzag.bib
diff -u manuscripts/gzigzag.bib:1.149 manuscripts/gzigzag.bib:1.150
--- manuscripts/gzigzag.bib:1.149       Sun Nov  2 14:01:43 2003
+++ manuscripts/gzigzag.bib     Mon Nov  3 14:15:11 2003
@@ -72,8 +72,8 @@
     }
 
 @inproceedings{fallenstein03storm,
-       author = {Benja Fallenstein and Tuomas Lukka and Hermanni Hyytiälä and 
Toni Alatalo},
-       title = {Storm: Using P2P to make the desktop part of the Web},
+       author = {Benja Fallenstein and Tuomas Lukka and Hermanni Hyyti\"al\"a 
and Toni Alatalo},
+       title = {Storm: {U}sing {P2P} to Make the Desktop Part of the {W}eb},
         booktitle = {Proc. Hypertext'03},
         year = {2003},
         isbn = {1-58113-704-4},
Index: manuscripts/pointers/article.rst
diff -u manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.101 
manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.102
--- manuscripts/pointers/article.rst:1.101      Mon Nov  3 13:18:37 2003
+++ manuscripts/pointers/article.rst    Mon Nov  3 14:15:11 2003
@@ -50,7 +50,8 @@
 and increase availability. However, if the Web worked like
 a filesharing system, Web pages could never be updated.
 
-Some filesharing systems offer URIs for files (e.g., [XXXref]).
+Some filesharing systems offer URIs for files 
+(e.g., [freenet-ieee-andalso-edonkey2kurl]_).
 These URIs are based on the files' cryptographic hashes.
 A new version of a Web page would have a different hash,
 and thus a different URI.
@@ -67,7 +68,10 @@
 is signed with the appropriate key, and contains a timestamp
 newer than that of the current version.
 
-In *OceanStore* [kubiatowicz00oceanstore]_, every document has a
+In *OceanStore* [kubiatowicz00oceanstore]_, 
+an Internet-scale distributed data store that 
+allows users to keep their files save and access them 
+from different locations, every document has a 
 *primary replica*, a small set of servers that
 maintain the current version of the document.
 To make the connection between document and version,
@@ -84,7 +88,8 @@
 allowing previous versions of documents to be accessed
 (by using their old heartbeats).
 
-*Freenet* [freenet-ieee]_ was originally planned to have an
+*Freenet*, a P2P network for anonymous publication [freenet-ieee]_,
+was originally planned to have an
 update mechanism where the network would remember
 the current version of a document, and update this information
 when receiving a message signed by the appropriate key,
@@ -247,7 +252,7 @@
 taken together form a full history of the document.
 The list of available records can be obtained through a
 peer-to-peer network; this could be a DHT, a flooding broadcasting
-network like Gnutella [XXXref], or any other P2P architecture.
+network like Gnutella [gnutellauri]_, or any other P2P architecture.
 
 In addition to the above information, a pointer record
 may contain a list of versions that the current version