[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/FutureVision vision.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

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Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/09/18 04:48:53

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        FutureVision   : vision.rst 

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        twids

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diff -u manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.55 
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--- manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst:1.55    Thu Sep 18 03:22:52 2003
+++ manuscripts/FutureVision/vision.rst Thu Sep 18 04:48:53 2003
@@ -303,14 +303,19 @@
 Related work
 ============
 
-The system we are proposing touches on a number of ...
+The system we are proposing is a logical extension
+of several existing concepts and systems.
+
+The *extensional* structure, 
+as introduced by `DeRose (1989)`_ is an important concept 
+in this context. 
 
 Flexible structure - Unifying structured and unstructured information
 ---------------------------------------------------------------------
-As argued by `DeRose (1989)`_, 
 
 The Aquanet system by `Marshall et al (1991)`_ 
 
+
     - really interesting development
 
     - unified ideas from the freely structured hypertext systems
@@ -580,9 +585,13 @@
    It would be possible to show and hide each type of relationship
    independently, by selecting or deselecting it on a list.
 
-.. [#hypertext-personal] Much of the work on the hypertext/hypermedia
-   field is focused on *presenting* information to and *audience*,
-   on hypertext/hypermedia being a *medium*. 
+..  [#hypertext-personal] Much of the work on the hypertext/hypermedia
+    field is focused on *presenting* information to and *audience*,
+    on hypertext/hypermedia being a *medium*. 
+    The *extensional* structure, 
+    as introduced by `DeRose (1989)`_ is an important concept 
+    in this context: it could be said to be structure
+    that is not part of the medium of presentation.
    
 
 .. [#novel-planning-example] The characters, events, twists