[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm short-paper.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/05/30 13:14:33

Modified files:
        storm          : short-paper.rst 

Log message:
        twids

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst.diff?tr1=1.29&tr2=1.30&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst
diff -u manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.29 
manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.30
--- manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.29      Fri May 30 13:05:15 2003
+++ manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst   Fri May 30 13:14:33 2003
@@ -116,14 +116,15 @@
 .. using location-independent identifiers for
    non-breaking links:
 
-If desktop documents could be referred to independently
-of their location, it would be possible to make
-non-breaking links to them: When a document is published
+Location-independent identifiers enable non-breaking links
+on the desktop and the Web:
+When a document is published
 on the Web, it would have the same URI as on the
 author's local desktop; when a link to a document is emailed,
 the receiver could follow the link as long as their
 software can locate the linked document-- on its local
-harddisk, attached to another email, or on the
+harddisk, attached to another email, on the work group server
+or on the
 public Internet.
 
 .. Freenet's cryptographical identifiers: