[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/storm short-paper.rst

[Benja Fallenstein]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Benja Fallenstein <address@hidden>      03/05/29 21:55:56

Modified files:
        storm          : short-paper.rst 

Log message:
        twid more

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst.diff?tr1=1.14&tr2=1.15&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst
diff -u manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.14 
manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.15
--- manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst:1.14      Thu May 29 21:44:26 2003
+++ manuscripts/storm/short-paper.rst   Thu May 29 21:55:56 2003
@@ -138,7 +138,7 @@
 We are developing a library storing
 documents on the desktop and publishing and retrieving
 documents from the network.
-Our system, Storm (for STORage Modules),
+Our system, Storm (for STORage Module),
 uses Freenet-like cryptographic identifiers.
 On the user level, Storm could be used as a
 replacement for both file names and HTTP URLs
@@ -150,7 +150,7 @@
 We are using an experimental URN namespace
 (Uniform Resource Name, a persistent kind of URI)
 and are preparing the registration
-of an informal namespace with IANA. This allows our
+of a real namespace with IANA. This allows our
 system's identifiers to be used in Web hyperlinks.
 
 .. accessible through Java library or http gateway:
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@
 by using the Java library directly or through an
 HTTP gateway, which, given a Storm URN, finds and
 returns the associated file. Documents can be
-uploaded into Storm using HTTP PUT.
+uploaded into Storm through the gateway, using HTTP PUT.
 
 .. Applications we are integrated with:
 
@@ -174,8 +174,8 @@
    (needs more complete WebDAV impl to save):
 
 The Emacs text editor doesn't understand Storm
-URNs yet, but can load and save documents using
-Storm through the HTTP gateway. OpenOffice.org
+URNs yet, but can load and save documents in
+Storm using the HTTP gateway. OpenOffice.org
 can load documents through the HTTP gateway,
 but cannot save changes, because the gateway
 does not yet support WebDAV (HTTP-based distributed
@@ -185,7 +185,7 @@
 
 The HTTP gateway also provides a Web interface
 to Storm, giving the user a list of all documents
-stored on their local hard disk, and allows users
+stored on their local hard disk, and allowing them
 to conduct searches over the titles of all documents
 published on the network.