[Gzz-commits] manuscripts/Control1 poster.rst

[Tuomas J. Lukka]

CVSROOT:        /cvsroot/gzz
Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/05/05 18:11:05

Modified files:
        Control1       : poster.rst 

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        twid

CVSWeb URLs:
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/Control1/poster.rst.diff?tr1=1.98&tr2=1.99&r1=text&r2=text

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Index: manuscripts/Control1/poster.rst
diff -u manuscripts/Control1/poster.rst:1.98 
manuscripts/Control1/poster.rst:1.99
--- manuscripts/Control1/poster.rst:1.98        Mon May  5 18:09:55 2003
+++ manuscripts/Control1/poster.rst     Mon May  5 18:11:05 2003
@@ -253,13 +253,13 @@
 Figures [ref-figrequired]_ - [ref-figoptomechanism]_ explain
 the internal mechanism of optomechanical mice, 
 
-Our first solutions involved replacing the slitted disks
+Our first attempts involved replacing the slitted disks
 moving through the light gate with hand-made cardboard or plastic 
 cutouts skewered on LEGO axles. 
 This turned out not to be a good construction, requiring far too much
 handwork in the construction as well as not being very accurate.
 
-The next solution was to try using small LEGO gears as the slitted
+The next approach was to try using small LEGO gears as the slitted
 disks. This made the construction far simpler, requiring no 
 additional materials or tools, but the accuracy was severely 
 affected: the gate missed a large fraction of the events.