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[Tuomas J. Lukka]

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Module name:    manuscripts
Changes by:     Tuomas J. Lukka <address@hidden>        03/03/31 14:07:04

Modified files:
        .              : gzigzag.bib 
        Paper          : Makefile paper.tex 

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http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/gzigzag.bib.diff?tr1=1.69&tr2=1.70&r1=text&r2=text
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/Paper/Makefile.diff?tr1=1.17&tr2=1.18&r1=text&r2=text
http://savannah.gnu.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs/gzz/manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex.diff?tr1=1.121&tr2=1.122&r1=text&r2=text

Patches:
Index: manuscripts/Paper/Makefile
diff -u manuscripts/Paper/Makefile:1.17 manuscripts/Paper/Makefile:1.18
--- manuscripts/Paper/Makefile:1.17     Mon Mar 31 13:44:14 2003
+++ manuscripts/Paper/Makefile  Mon Mar 31 14:07:04 2003
@@ -19,9 +19,10 @@
        bleaching3z.ps bleaching4z.ps bleaching5z.ps \
        bleaching6z.ps bleaching7z.ps bleaching8z.ps \
 
-paper.dvi: pipe.1 xupdf1.ps xupdf2.ps pipeline.eps buoyoing.1 buoyoing.5 
zipfarea.1 paper.tex visper.1 visper.2 $(BLEACHINGPICS) multipaper.ps
+paper.dvi: pipe.1 xupdf1.ps xupdf2.ps pipeline.eps buoyoing.1 buoyoing.5 
zipfarea.1 paper.tex visper.1 visper.2 $(BLEACHINGPICS) multipaper.ps 
../gzigzag.bib
        latex "${LATEXCMD} paper"
        BIBINPUTS=..:$$BIBINPUTS bibtex paper
+       latex "${LATEXCMD} paper"
        latex "${LATEXCMD} paper"
 
 pipe.1: pipe.mp
Index: manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex
diff -u manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.121 manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.122
--- manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex:1.121   Mon Mar 31 13:44:16 2003
+++ manuscripts/Paper/paper.tex Mon Mar 31 14:07:04 2003
@@ -585,15 +585,20 @@
 such as different shapes and colors, 
 are combined to form an abstract \emph{feature vector}
 (see Fig.~\ref{fig-perceptual}).
+As seen for example in \cite{olson02vstm}, only 
+a limited
+number of different features detected can be grouped into 
+objects, indicating that the spatial resolution of the feature
+vector is quite low - as a well-known example, conjunction
+coding is not preattentive - red squares are hard to find among
+green squares and red and green circles.
+
 The feature vector is then used to compute 
 which concept the particular
 input corresponds to by comparing it to memorized models
 in a simple perceptron-like 
 fashion\cite{rosenblatt62neurodynamics,widrow60adaptive}.
 This configuration is commonly used in neural computation.
-As seen for example in \cite{olson02vstm}, only a limited
-number of different features detected can be grouped into 
-objects, ... XXX SO!!! JVK
 
 \begin{figure}
 \centering
@@ -1272,25 +1277,22 @@
 
 \subsection{Text readability}
 
-JVK: KÄYTÄ viitettä
-
 %XXX: http://www.opticsexpress.org/abstract.cfm?URI=OPEX-6-4-81
 % "Background variation effects were only seen when the text contrast was low"
 % "[...] several studies have indicated that there is a low correlation between
 %  subjective preference for text displays and empirical measures of their
 %  readability."
 
-Experiments in \cite{scharff00discriminability} indicate, that
-a background texture only affects readability when the text contrast is low.
-Also, subjective assesments of readibilty often have low correlation
-with objective measurements\cite{scharff00discriminability}.
-XXX
-
 The most common criticism against this work concerns 
 text readability. 
 Indeed, one of the most difficult aspects of this work {\em was} tuning the 
random
 color selection to produce acceptable results.
 However, in the current version, even relatively small text is quite legible 
on the backgrounds.
+
+Experiments in \cite{scharff00discriminability} indicate that
+a background texture only affects readability when the text contrast is low.
+Also, as discussed there, subjective assessments of readability often have low 
correlation
+with objective measurements.
 
 Additionally,
 text readability on the generated backgrounds depends 
Index: manuscripts/gzigzag.bib
diff -u manuscripts/gzigzag.bib:1.69 manuscripts/gzigzag.bib:1.70
--- manuscripts/gzigzag.bib:1.69        Mon Mar 31 11:16:30 2003
+++ manuscripts/gzigzag.bib     Mon Mar 31 14:07:04 2003
@@ -381,7 +381,7 @@
 @inproceedings{furnas00infinity,
  author = {George W. Furnas and Xiaolong Zhang},
  title = {Illusions of infinity: feedback for infinite worlds},
- booktitle = {Proceedings of the 13th annual ACM symposium on User interface 
software and technology},
+ booktitle = {Proc. UIST'00P},
  year = {2000},
  isbn = {1-58113-212-3},
  pages = {237--238},
@@ -1029,7 +1029,7 @@
 @inproceedings{blinn78bump,
  author = {James F. Blinn},
  title = {Simulation of wrinkled surfaces},
- booktitle = {Proceedings of the 5th annual conference on Computer graphics 
and interactive techniques},
+ booktitle = {Proc. SIGGRAPH'78},
  year = {1978},
  pages = {286--292},
  doi = {http://doi.acm.org/10.1145/800248.507101},
@@ -2835,7 +2835,7 @@
 @inproceedings{milgram99hypercept,
  author = {Dan Milgram and William B. Cowan},
  title = {Hypercept: behavioural linkage in hypertext environments},
- booktitle = {Proceedings of the 1999 workshop on new paradigms in information 
visualization and manipulation in conjunction with the eighth ACM internation 
conference on Information and knowledge management},
+ booktitle = {Proc. NPIVM'99},
  year = {1999},
  isbn = {1-58113-254-9},
  pages = {49--55},