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diff -u gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/masterthesis.tex:1.141 
gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/masterthesis.tex:1.142
--- gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/masterthesis.tex:1.141      Thu Mar 
13 08:34:55 2003
+++ gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/masterthesis.tex    Thu Mar 13 
08:47:15 2003
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
 Peer-to-Peer improves scalability and avoids single points of failure.
 
 There are many definitions of Peer-to-Peer networks. Schollmeier 
\cite{schollmeier01p2pdefinition} 
-describes a Peer-to-Peer system as a system of 
+describes Peer-to-Peer system as a system of 
 distributed entities that share their own services. Thus, Peer-to-Peer systems 
can be characterized as distributed 
 systems in which all communication is symmetric and all participants entities 
have similar 
 capabilities and responsibilities. Each entity, i.e., \emph{peer}, may 
contribute services 
@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@
 
 
 \chapter{Peer-to-Peer architectures}
-In this chapter we will give brief history and overview of Peer-to-Peer 
networks, 
+In this chapter we will give a brief history and overview of Peer-to-Peer 
networks, 
 review most important Peer-to-Peer algorithms and list key differences between 
 two main approaches.
 
@@ -149,7 +149,8 @@
 In subsequent years, the Internet became more restricted to client--server 
based 
 applications. In recent years, however, Peer-to-Peer systems have again 
emerged 
 room in computing world. Indeed, Peer-to-Peer has had significant social and 
technical 
-attention in academia, industry and media. Already deceased Napster 
\cite{napsterurl}, 
+attention in academia \cite{projectirisurl}, industry \cite{p2pworkinggroup}, 
+\cite{jxtaurl}. Already deceased Napster \cite{napsterurl}, 
 launched in 1999, was a new starting point for modern Peer-to-Peer computing. 
After
 Napster, hundreds of Peer-to-Peer systems have been developed and proposed. 
 
@@ -164,8 +165,8 @@
 \label{fig:application_level}
 \end{figure}
 
-Compared to ARPA Net's Peer-to-Peer functionality, modern Peer-to-Peer systems
-are ad-hoc, i.e., peers join and leave the system constantly in a dynamic 
manner. This
+Compared to ARPANET's Peer-to-Peer functionality, modern Peer-to-Peer systems
+are ad hoc, i.e., peers join and leave the system constantly in a dynamic 
manner. This
 fact constitutes challenging requirements for efficient construction and 
maintenance
 of the overlay network. Even more demanding tasks are how to perform efficient 
data
 lookup and maintain security in a varying distributed environment. The most 
popular
@@ -177,7 +178,7 @@
 In a development of modern Peer-to-Peer systems, lot of influences has been 
attained from 
 other research areas than computer science. Research has been conducted 
regarding 
 to self-organizing nature of complex networks \cite{albert-02-statistical}, 
\cite{albert-00-tolerance}, \cite{watts00dynamics}. 
-It's interesting to realize that chemical properties of cells, the Internet, 
ad-hoc 
+It's interesting to realize that chemical properties of cells, the Internet, 
ad hoc 
 Peer-to-Peer systems, and social networks have all in common that they 
self-organize based on same 
 principles.  Furthermore, the association between social relationships among 
people 
 and Peer-to-Peer overlay topology has been studied recently  
\cite{watts00dynamics}, 
@@ -214,7 +215,7 @@
 
 Gnutella \cite{gnutellaurl} is a well-known example of loosely structured 
overlay network. As in
 other Peer-to-Peer networks, no peer is more important than any other peer in 
the network.
-The construction and maintenance of Gnutella network is extremely ad-hoc, 
since participating
+The construction and maintenance of Gnutella network is extremely ad hoc, 
since participating
 peers can form the overlay network based on \emph{local} knowledge. Figure 
\ref{fig:gnutella_overlay}
 illustrates how peers form an overlay network. Initially, peer 1 creates the 
overlay, since
 it's the first participating peer. Then, repeatedly new peers join the network 
and connect to
@@ -225,7 +226,7 @@
 \begin{figure}
 \centering
 \includegraphics[width=6cm, height=6cm]{gnutella_overlay.eps}
-\caption{Gnutella's loosely structured ad-hoc connectivity graph.}
+\caption{Gnutella's loosely structured ad hoc connectivity graph.}
 \label{fig:gnutella_overlay}
 \end{figure}
 
Index: gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/progradu.bib
diff -u gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/progradu.bib:1.109 
gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/progradu.bib:1.110
--- gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/progradu.bib:1.109  Thu Mar 13 
08:18:58 2003
+++ gzz/Documentation/misc/hemppah-progradu/progradu.bib        Thu Mar 13 
08:47:15 2003
@@ -1235,7 +1235,7 @@
 
 %Small world phenomenon
 @article{kleinberg99small,
-       author = "Jon Kleinberg",
+       author = "J. Kleinberg",
        title = "The small-world phenomenon: An algorithmic perspective",
        journal = "Cornell Computer Science Technical Report",
        volume = "1776",
@@ -1246,7 +1246,7 @@
 
 %Small world phenomenon
 @InProceedings{nips02-Kleinberg,
-       author    = "Jon Kleinberg",
+       author    = "J. Kleinberg",
        original  = "orig/Kleinberg.ps",  
        title     = "Small-World Phenomena and the Dynamics of Information",
        booktitle = "Advances in Neural Information Processing Systems 14",