RE: Making the case for GNU Guix ... advice sought

[Cook, Malcolm]

Hi,

I've tried to incorporate your collective feedback to 
https://github.com/malcook/sce/blob/master/MakingTheCase.org which this commit

        
https://github.com/malcook/sce/commit/917b55e1a0a9d8a5b79aa43b2a751db603cca34d?diff=split

You can expect another round of edits once I get clear about some of Ricardo's 
thoughtful & detailed comments (to which I have just now replied with some 
add-on questions).

Thanks everyone, this is very helpful to me, 

~Malcolm

 > -----Original Message-----
 > From: address@hidden [mailto:guix-devel-
 > address@hidden On Behalf Of Cook, Malcolm
 > Sent: Wednesday, February 10, 2016 10:02 AM
 > To: 'Ludovic Courtès' <address@hidden>; 'Ricardo Wurmus'
 > <address@hidden>; 'Pjotr Prins' <address@hidden>; 'Leo
 > Famulari' <address@hidden>
 > Cc: 'Guix-devel' <address@hidden>; 'address@hidden
 > bio.org' <address@hidden>
 > Subject: RE: Making the case for GNU Guix ... advice sought
 > 
 > Hi,
 > 
 > Thanks everyone for the many valuable suggestions and education.
 > 
 > Next week I intend to incorporate the suggested improvements as best I can
 > and follow up with an edit that I will use in-house, and share back out via 
 > git-
 > hub.
 > 
 > Though the document is aimed at my particular internal "project 
 > justification",
 > I am trying to keep it generic, and will welcome suggestions for further
 > reshaping it to be of more general value should there be such interest from
 > y'all.
 > 
 > GoGuix,
 > 
 > Malcolm