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Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter.
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Eric Bavier |
Subject: |
Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter. |
Date: |
Sun, 20 Sep 2015 15:19:09 -0500 |
On Sun, 20 Sep 2015 17:49:44 +0200
Ricardo Wurmus <address@hidden> wrote:
> On IRC I was told that the description wasn’t quite as neutral as it
> should have been, so here’s another attempt:
>
> "M.A.R.S. is a 2D space shooter with pretty visual effects and
> attractive physics. Players can battle each other or computer controlled
> enemies in different game modes such as space ball, death match, team death
> match, cannon keep, and grave-itation pit."
>
> * “pretty visual effects” rather than “awesome visual effects”.
> * “attractive physics” — I could not think of a more appropriate term; it
> surely is not “realistic”.
> * “exciting game modes” has become “different game modes such as ...”
>
> What do you think?
This version seems more appropriate to me. Thanks!
`~Eric
- Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter., (continued)
Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter., Eric Bavier, 2015/09/19
Re: [PATCH] Add MARS shooter., Ricardo Wurmus, 2015/09/20
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