[donau] 02/03: chapter 2: add comma, parsimonious rewording

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Author: Jonathan <ondesmartenot@riseup.net>
AuthorDate: Thu Jan 23 16:39:21 2025 +0800

    chapter 2: add comma, parsimonious rewording
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 doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/requirements.tex | 4 ++--
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diff --git a/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/requirements.tex 
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--- a/doc/usenix-security-2025/paper/requirements.tex
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@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ ecosystem in the full knowledge that this will need to be 
updated.
 
 In particular, this section should not be misunderstood as an overview of
 current legal requirements across the world on how taxation on donations work.
-Taxation is predictably unpopular despite its clear essential function in how
-modern societies work, and therefore a very political topic that makes both
+Taxation is predictably unpopular, despite its clear essential function in
+modern society, and therefore a very political topic that makes both
 fiscal legislation and the way it is interpreted subject to frequent change and
 much variation. Just like taxation on labor and profits, on property, on
 inheritance, on income from investment or gambling, or on consumption of

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