[taler-donau] branch master updated: small fixes

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commit 75ffb94da157b4abd7ad1f7b12b46b00012f09d4
Author: Casaburi Johannes <johannes.casaburi@students.bfh.ch>
AuthorDate: Fri Jun 7 20:42:36 2024 +0200

    small fixes
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 doc/thesis/chapters/introduction/scope.tex |   7 ++++---
 doc/thesis/chapters/results/conclusion.tex |   2 +-
 doc/thesis/thesis.pdf                      | Bin 2212431 -> 2212492 bytes
 3 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/thesis/chapters/introduction/scope.tex 
b/doc/thesis/chapters/introduction/scope.tex
index 270d3d7..1b13351 100644
--- a/doc/thesis/chapters/introduction/scope.tex
+++ b/doc/thesis/chapters/introduction/scope.tex
@@ -1,7 +1,8 @@
 \section{Scope}\label{scope}
-At the start of the project the REST API specifications together with the 
database schema for the Donau and the Donau protocol was wrote.
-While implementing the Donau tests were written to ensure that the endpoints 
work correctly.
-During the project the code was documented and various other documents like 
presentations and project summaries and a short film were created.
+At the start of the project the REST API specifications together with the 
database schema and Donau protocol was written.
+While implementing, the Donau API and DB tests were written to ensure that the 
endpoints and database work correctly.
+During the project the code was documented and various other documents like 
presentations and project summaries were created.
+This included a short video presenting the Donau.
 To demonstrate the Donau an Android application was developped that can verify 
donations by scanning a QR-Code.
 
 An interview was also held with the tax authority Zürich, which has provided 
valuable insight in how donations are verified and important aspects that a 
system like the Donau should fulfill.
diff --git a/doc/thesis/chapters/results/conclusion.tex 
b/doc/thesis/chapters/results/conclusion.tex
index 1475a85..b40373a 100644
--- a/doc/thesis/chapters/results/conclusion.tex
+++ b/doc/thesis/chapters/results/conclusion.tex
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 \section{Conclusion}\label{conclusion}
 Tax transparency is a crucial aspect of a well-functioning society, as it 
fosters trust, accountability, and fairness in the relationship between the 
state and its citizens. Transparency allows for public scrutiny, which can help 
identify inefficiencies, loopholes, or instances of corruption within the tax 
system, ultimately leading to necessary reforms and improvements.
 
-Unfortunately, it occured that some tax departments still rely on outdated, 
paper-based systems or legacy software, hindering their ability to operate 
efficiently and transparently. The lack of digitization not only slows down 
processes but also increases the risk of errors, data inconsistencies, and 
potential mishandling of sensitive information.
+Unfortunately, it occured to us that some tax departments still rely on 
outdated, paper-based systems or legacy software, hindering their ability to 
operate efficiently and transparently. The lack of digitization not only slows 
down processes but also increases the risk of errors, data inconsistencies, and 
potential mishandling of sensitive information.
 
 The adoption of free and open-source software (FOSS) presents a compelling 
solution. FOSS solutions offer several advantages, including 
cost-effectiveness, customizability, and the ability to scrutinize the 
underlying code for security and transparency purposes. By embracing FOSS, tax 
departments can modernize their systems, streamline processes, and enhance data 
integrity, ultimately fostering greater transparency and trust with the public.
 
diff --git a/doc/thesis/thesis.pdf b/doc/thesis/thesis.pdf
index 29b42cf..3806488 100644
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