[taler-docs] branch master updated: Minor improvements in wording

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     new 75ea74ff Minor improvements in wording
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commit 75ea74ff16ff275bc04dbd0120e508f889c66f74
Author: Javier Sepulveda <javier.sepulveda@uv.es>
AuthorDate: Wed Nov 29 17:12:12 2023 +0100

    Minor improvements in wording
---
 libeufin/regional-manual.rst | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/libeufin/regional-manual.rst b/libeufin/regional-manual.rst
index 944d27ef..f6b546d9 100644
--- a/libeufin/regional-manual.rst
+++ b/libeufin/regional-manual.rst
@@ -58,13 +58,13 @@ desired setup, in particular:
   * The name of the regional currency. It must have 3 to 11 letters.
   * The name of the regional currency bank. It will be shown to business
     users when they interact with the system.
-  * Whether to use TLS. You should answer ``y`` in most cases.
+  * Whether to use TLS or not. You should answer ``y`` in most cases.
   * Whether to run taler-exchange-offline. Unless you need a high-security
     setup and expect to run an offline key management process, say ``y``.
     If you say ``n``, you will need to run ``taler-exchange-offline setup``
     on your offline system and provide the master public key. Furthermore,
-    you should then study the exchange manual on
-    offline key management to finish the exchange setup process later.
+    you should then study the exchange manual on offline key management to
+    finish the exchange setup process later.
   * The admin password for the bank. Be absolutely sure to enter a very,
     very long and high-entropy password, preferably generated by a tool
     like "uuidgen".
@@ -100,9 +100,9 @@ Prerequisites
 -------------
 
 You must have a bank account at a bank dealing in fiat currency that offers an
-online banking protocol supported by LibEuFin Nexus.  As legacy transactions
+online banking protocol supported by LibEuFin Nexus. As legacy transactions
 in that bank account would likely confuse the system, it is highly advised to
-use a fresh account with an empty transaction history.
+use a fresh bank account, with an empty transaction history.
 
 Today, the LibEuFin implementation supports EBICS 2.5 and 3.0 and has been
 tested with the GLS Bank (EUR) and the Postfinance (CHF). Please note that
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ in our setup.
 Testing the installation
 ------------------------
 
-In the same ``netzbon/`` folder, run the script ``withdraw.sh``.  If it 
completes
+In the same ``netzbon/`` folder, run the script ``./withdraw.sh``.  If it 
completes
 successfuly, the command ``taler-wallet-cli`` got 5 units more of regional 
currency
 to spend!
 
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ should then be able to start a cash out operation. This 
will trigger a
 transfer from your regional currency account to the regional currency
 master ``bank`` account which will effectively destroy the respective
 amount of regional currency. The conversion triggers will inform Nexus
-about the destruction and Nexus will then wire the corresponding amount
+about the destruction, and Nexus will then wire the corresponding amount
 in fiat to the associated fiat bank account.
 
 

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