[lsd0004] 01/05: English fix

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commit 71afec1862b82c3b93dce66da7127b15ff18a923
Author: Christian Grothoff <grothoff@gnunet.org>
AuthorDate: Sat Aug 26 12:47:17 2023 +0200

    English fix
---
 draft-schanzen-r5n.xml | 5 +++--
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml b/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
index cef5382..1a0dbe6 100644
--- a/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
+++ b/draft-schanzen-r5n.xml
@@ -1069,7 +1069,8 @@ BEGIN
          is created by the current hop only after the peer made its routing
          decision identifiying the successor peer. The peer public key is not
          included after the last signature as it must be that of the sender of
-         the message. Similarly, the predecessor of the first element of
+         the message and including it would thus be redundant.
+         Similarly, the predecessor of the first element of
          an untruncated path is not stated explicitly, as it must be ZERO.
         </t>
         <t>
@@ -1395,7 +1396,7 @@ BEGIN
        <t>
          <tt>PutMessage</tt>s are used to store information at other peers in 
the DHT.
           Any API which allows applications to initiate <tt>PutMessage</tt>s 
needs to
-          provide sufficient, implementation-specific information needed to 
construct
+          provide sufficient, implementation-specific information to construct
           the initial <tt>PutMessage</tt>.
           For example, implementations supporting multiple applications and 
blocks will
           have block type and message flag parameters in addition to the 
actual data

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