[taler-docs] 03/03: typos and rephrasing

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Author: MS <ms@taler.net>
AuthorDate: Sat Jan 16 00:37:09 2021 +0100

    typos and rephrasing
---
 libeufin/nexus-tutorial.rst | 29 +++++++++++++----------------
 1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/libeufin/nexus-tutorial.rst b/libeufin/nexus-tutorial.rst
index 6e65228..49bcc23 100644
--- a/libeufin/nexus-tutorial.rst
+++ b/libeufin/nexus-tutorial.rst
@@ -194,12 +194,11 @@ and ``LIBEUFIN_NEXUS_PASSWORD``.  In this example, 
``LIBEUFIN_NEXUS_USERNAME`` s
 set to ``foo``, and ``LIBEUFIN_NEXUS_PASSWORD`` to the value given for its 
password
 in step (2).
 
-Next, we will create an EBICS *bank connection* that
-nexus can use to communicate with the bank.
+Next, we create a EBICS *bank connection* that nexus can use to communicate 
with the bank.
 
 .. note::
 
-   For the sandbox set up in this guide, the EBICS base URL
+   For the sandbox setup in this guide, the EBICS base URL
    is ``http://localhost:5000/ebicsweb``.
 
 .. code-block:: console
@@ -227,12 +226,13 @@ a backup copy* of such keys.
           --output-file $BACKUP_FILE \
           $CONNECTION_NAME
 
-At this point, Nexus must communicate all the details to the bank.  Therefore,
-it will synchronize the connection.  In this EBICS example, Nexus will send
-the *INI* and *HIA* messages to the bank.
+At this point, Nexus needs to both communicate its keys to the bank, and
+download the bank's.  This syncronization happens through the INI, HIA, and
+finally HPB message types.
 
-Now that the bank has received the public keys of the subscriber 
electronically,
-it also needs to verify them offline.  For this, the nexus can generate a key 
letter:
+After the electronic synchronization, the subscriber must confirm their keys
+by sending a physical mail to the bank.  The following command helps generating
+such letter:
 
 .. code-block:: console
 
@@ -240,9 +240,6 @@ it also needs to verify them offline.  For this, the nexus 
can generate a key le
 
 .. note::
 
-   The resulting PDF should be sent to the bank, which will verify
-   that the keys printed in it match the keys sent electronically.
-
    When using the LibEuFin sandbox, subscribers are automatically
    activated after keys are received electronically.
 
@@ -273,7 +270,7 @@ It is now possible to list the accounts offered by the 
connection.
         list-offered-bank-accounts \
           $CONNECTION_NAME
 
-Nexus now needs an explicit import of the accounts it should to manage.  This
+Nexus now needs an explicit import of the accounts it should manage.  This
 step is needed to let the user pick a custom name for such accounts.
 
 .. code-block:: console
@@ -281,7 +278,7 @@ step is needed to let the user pick a custom name for such 
accounts.
   $ libeufin-cli
       connections \
         import-bank-account \
-          --offered-account-id $ACCOUNT_NATIVE_NAME \
+          --offered-account-id testacct01 \
           --nexus-bank-account-id $CUSTOM_RENAMING_FOR_ACCOUNT \
           $CONNECTION_NAME
 
@@ -313,8 +310,8 @@ This command asks Nexus to *download the latest bank 
statements*:
 .. note::
 
    By default, the latest available transactions are fetched.  It is also
-   possible to specify a custom data range (or even all available transactions)
-   and the type of transactions to fetch ( inter-day statements or intra-day
+   possible to specify a custom date range (or even all available transactions)
+   and the type of transactions to fetch (inter-day statements or intra-day
    reports).
 
 Once Nexus stored all the information in the database, the
@@ -353,7 +350,7 @@ Note: the ``$AMOUNT`` value needs the format 
``X.Y:CURRENCY``; for example
 ``10:EUR``, or ``1.01:EUR``.
 
 The previous command should return a value (``$UUID``) that uniquely
-identifies the prepared payment in the Nexus system.  It'll be needed
+identifies the prepared payment in the Nexus system.  That is needed
 in the next step, to **send the payment instructions to the bank**:
 
 .. code-block:: console

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