[Gnash-commit] gnash/doc/C netconnection.xml

[Ann Barcomb]

CVSROOT:        /sources/gnash
Module name:    gnash
Changes by:     Ann Barcomb <ann>       06/10/20 18:22:40

Modified files:
        doc/C          : netconnection.xml 

Log message:
        * punctuation nits
        * some rewriting for clarification
        * also changed 'an URL' to 'a URL' which is subject to debate (depends 
upon
          the pronunciation of the word).

CVSWeb URLs:
http://cvs.savannah.gnu.org/viewcvs/gnash/doc/C/netconnection.xml?cvsroot=gnash&r1=1.7&r2=1.8

Patches:
Index: netconnection.xml
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RCS file: /sources/gnash/gnash/doc/C/netconnection.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.7
retrieving revision 1.8
diff -u -b -r1.7 -r1.8
--- netconnection.xml   20 Oct 2006 15:12:20 -0000      1.7
+++ netconnection.xml   20 Oct 2006 18:22:40 -0000      1.8
@@ -9,11 +9,11 @@
   </para>
 
   <para>
-    This class was first introduced for swf v7. and the behaviour has
+    This class was first introduced for swf v7 and the behaviour has
     recently changed slightly to allow the loading of files from
-    external systems. Prior to this, it was required to pass NULL to
-    this class. Gnash handles both cases. The older behaviour default
-    is connecting to the local filesystem for the file.
+    external systems. Prior to this, you were required to pass NULL to
+    this class. Gnash handles both cases. The older behaviour is default
+    when connecting to the local filesystem for the file.
   </para>
 
   <para>
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@
          <listitem>
            <para>
              Connect to a local or remote system to load a
-             FLV file. Arg can be NULL, or an URL.
+             FLV file. Arg can be NULL, or a URL.
            </para>
          </listitem>
          </varlistentry>
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
                  This method is partially implemented. It can only be
                  used in conjunction with the <link
                  linkend="asnetstream">NetStream</link> and <link
-                 linkend="asvideo">Video</link> classes, it cannot
+                 linkend="asvideo">Video</link> classes; it cannot
                  load a FLV file by itself.
                </para>
              </entry>