[Fsfe-uk] Help -- can you correct this, please?

[MJ Ray]

Please, can we edit this press release and I'll send it back to them
tonight?  Thanks.  I'll wade in with the obvious "let's flip all Linux but
the title and the expansion of LUG" comment.  I'll also suggest simplifying
language (eg embodiment -> example) where possible.



UK Linux Install Day 2002
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Install Days (or 'Fests') have long been a embodiment of the community 
spirit that surrounds Linux and Free Software,  giving visitors the 
chance to bring along their own PCs and install Linux under expert 
supervision.

Inspired by the success of last year's UK Install Day, Dorset LUG have 
taken on the task of coordinating this years events.

Linux User Groups from around the UK will be coordinating events in May 
and June when visitors will be able to view demonstrations of the power 
and freedom of Linux at work in home and business scenarios.

UK Linux Install Day 2002 (http://www.linuxinstallday.org) gives Linux 
users the chance to promote the benefits of Linux to the wider 
community, including home users, businesses and schools.

LUGs who want to run an Install Day Event should contact John Robinson 
on address@hidden and those interested in attending 
should visit the website to find an event near them.

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MJR